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My hand traced small circles on the back of her hand.
I just wanted her to know how much I cared.
I wanted her to feel my warm touch.
She should know that I will always love her.
There will never be another girl like her, she can never be replaced.
Nor will she ever be.
I wanted her to realize how much I'd miss her.
I wanted to see her smile, just one more time.
But never again will she open her beautiful eyes.
Never again will she whisper into my ear.
Never again will she brush her soft lips against my own.
I'm so sorry, my baby, my only.
I can't let you see me cry… but I let you down, I couldn't save you.
I remember the first day we met, how you laughed at my stupid jokes.
I remember how you danced around the room like you were the only one in this world.
But I was there; I was with you, dancing by your side, like I always will be.
I will remember every second I spent with you my love.
I will cherish every memory, every laugh… every kiss.
But now dear, your hand grows cold in mine… I can't bear it anymore.
My tears dissolve into the soft fabric of your hospital bed,
And I kiss you for the last time.
This is what happens when I'm depressed. ._.

If only boys were actually like that.
SIGH.
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GodDreamsInColour Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was not expecting that.____. I love it!!!!!
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much ^^
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jseathl8 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is really beautiful....well expressed and highly emotional. Great poem. ;D
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :iconrlytearplz:
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Kaylianaa Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011
This is so very sweet :iconiloveitplz:

And not all guys suck. Sure, some of them tell you that you have chubby cheeks and look like a 7-year old, then tell you it's a compliment, but not all of them suck!

...I totally didn't insert my own personal experience into that or anything.
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!!! :iconrlytearplz:

I knooowww, but a lot of them do, ahaha. x3

LOL.
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K0USEKI Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DAAAAAWWWW (derpy aww face)
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Luul, THAAAANKS. :iconshaplz:
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K0USEKI Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Taha An no joke.... i wish guys were like that....
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
IIIIIIIII KNOW.
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K0USEKI Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kay dude if i got a straight jacket i could be an EPIC insane paitient for you. I knw exacty how to act and i wouldnt do it half assed
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
: DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Go get one right now.
RIGHT NOW.
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K0USEKI Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wheeeeeeerrreee
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
FUCKING....
..............
Internet?
Lul :noes:
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Ouzumi Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Student General Artist
Man, that almost made me cry a little. xD lol I really love this. :)
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. ^^
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Ouzumi Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Student General Artist
No problem. :)
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Rhianimation Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Student
I think I'm about to cry... THIS IS SOOOOOO SWEEET!!
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:iconbuttstrong:
buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!!
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:iconrhianimation:
Rhianimation Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Student
You're welcome this is really adorable though! I wish I could write stuff this sweet!
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:iconbuttstrong:
buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I bet you could, just use your imagination!! &&thank yeew ^^
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Rhianimation Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Student
:D I guess xD
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU CAN! I BELIEVE IN YOU! x3
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Rhianimation Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Student
YAY!! thanks
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU ARE WELCOME. xD
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v3n0m607 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Hey some guys are like that :P

Very nice poem :) very deep and very sad.
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm.. Maybe. ;P

Thank youuu. ^^
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:iconv3n0m607:
v3n0m607 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Cant judge em all by a few ;)

And you're welcome :)
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
True, true. x3

:D
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v3n0m607 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
;)

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BreakingProcess Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
jesus woman - that's deep, first deep thing ive seen in a while...or...ever XD
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Lool, naah. x3
Thank you though!
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BreakingProcess Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
yeah huh!
and yw :3
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Lul :iconhuggleplz:
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BreakingProcess Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
:hug: X3
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sammy-girl12 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
Sweet lol
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, ahah. x3
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sammy-girl12 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
Welcome lol thanks for the llama badge XP
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome && Thank you also! :dummy:
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sammy-girl12 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
Haha welcome XP
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