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My hand traced small circles on the back of her hand.
I just wanted her to know how much I cared.
I wanted her to feel my warm touch.
She should know that I will always love her.
There will never be another girl like her, she can never be replaced.
Nor will she ever be.
I wanted her to realize how much I'd miss her.
I wanted to see her smile, just one more time.
But never again will she open her beautiful eyes.
Never again will she whisper into my ear.
Never again will she brush her soft lips against my own.
I'm so sorry, my baby, my only.
I can't let you see me cry… but I let you down, I couldn't save you.
I remember the first day we met, how you laughed at my stupid jokes.
I remember how you danced around the room like you were the only one in this world.
But I was there; I was with you, dancing by your side, like I always will be.
I will remember every second I spent with you my love.
I will cherish every memory, every laugh… every kiss.
But now dear, your hand grows cold in mine… I can't bear it anymore.
My tears dissolve into the soft fabric of your hospital bed,
And I kiss you for the last time.
This is what happens when I'm depressed. ._.

If only boys were actually like that.
SIGH.
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GodDreamsInColour Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was not expecting that.____. I love it!!!!!
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much ^^
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jseathl8 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is really beautiful....well expressed and highly emotional. Great poem. ;D
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :iconrlytearplz:
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Kaylianaa Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011
This is so very sweet :iconiloveitplz:

And not all guys suck. Sure, some of them tell you that you have chubby cheeks and look like a 7-year old, then tell you it's a compliment, but not all of them suck!

...I totally didn't insert my own personal experience into that or anything.
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!!! :iconrlytearplz:

I knooowww, but a lot of them do, ahaha. x3

LOL.
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Ms-Cake-Bandit Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DAAAAAWWWW (derpy aww face)
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Luul, THAAAANKS. :iconshaplz:
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Ms-Cake-Bandit Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Taha An no joke.... i wish guys were like that....
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
IIIIIIIII KNOW.
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